Can someone please give me some feedback on my poem?

The rhyming is all wacky and it's very dull in imagery .Maybe you are trying too hard to write a poem for the sake of writing a poem and not letting whats really inside of you flow out on it's own as a poem.I'm not sure if you understand what I'm trying to say but it's kind of like you just can't force a good poem, but we can get excited when we start to write and try too hard .The good poems always seem to just come out of no where and sometimes I can't even believe I've written them.Just keep writing and don't spend too much time trying to fix old poems just write new ones .It's something you need to do all the time . Keep writing. ..............Or don't